Discrimination and Other Struggles part 1
Every essay needs a thesis statement, at least three body paragraphs and a concluding paragraph. Jenna is now taking an English based on writing letters to solicit scholarship funds. Her first theme currently is “Beat the Odds Scholarship”. I looked over her first rough draft and we changed some of it. It’s still not perfect but we knew that going in. One of the suggestions that her instructor has was that she should focus on overcoming disabilities or hardships that affected her life. Jenna’s only comment was the pandemic which is definitely NOT a personal struggle. It is still a struggle nonetheless – and the only one that either of us can think of. The fact that Roland and I are college graduates has already kept Jenna from the summer program that at least one of her friends had gone to this year. Our family way of life...